Poems!

Well I wrote this poem on a book I am writing. I dont think is too bad....

When the Road Splits in Two, Take the Third Path

The road has been long, with no end in sight

Behind me is just deluded memories

Somewhere in the center of the spiral, hold the keys

But do I deserve them?

I tell myself that it is for my crew

But is it really true?

I miss my life, my cherished ones

But so do every other living being here

As I look at myself in the mirror,

I can invision myself a hero, but underlying the illusion

Is a monster who took away the freedom of others

Though the race is fair, I cant help but wonder

What if I have plundered

And taken away a species destiny?

By winning the race,

How could I stare other species in the face,

When it is my people who come home, not theirs?

But if I back out, stay away,

My own people's freedom I shall take away.

Could I ever look them in the face,

And tell them they are damned to this desolate place?

Two paths to follow, both wrong and right,

Both shrouded in darkness and in light,

A friend once told me, "When the road splits in two, take the third path."

I cannot do the math, to find it.

I am split in indescion, a dangerous thing

I am their leader, they look to me for guidence,

But like an unsharpened lance, they're faith in me will fail if I cant make the choice.

I cannot get help, I must make this decision on my own

For a weak leader will be cast aside.

Steal other groups freedom, or take away my own's?

No emotions now, they are shrouding my mind

But I am human

Then what is my instict?

Protect those whom I do not know,

Or save my own kin?

The answer comes too quickly for me to bear, its so simple, but can be wrong

Wait, I see now,

The third path!

It was so simple, how could I not find it before?

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Some questions.
Can you understand whats happening?
Do you know why she couldn't see the third path before?
And do you have any idea what the third path might be?

well i'm not much of a connoisseur of literature, but as far as I can tell it's a pretty good poem.

Thanks. Do you have any idea whats happening?

Through the Darkness, I walk.

The lights i stuck to for so many years faded to nothing.

The world remained what I had thought of all my life.

A big nothing....

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Supr of moment thing....

Wow. Dreary but sounds great!

This world was once a happy placefilled with light,
Filled with delight,
Until one day,
Cars are invented...
Why not go back to the past?
Why cant we live like before?
Why are these things happening?
This world is cold and black,
I cant do anything,
One person alone cant do much..
But if we work together,
the world will be happy again.
Let wars stop!
No more fighting with eachother!
Please...
We cant take it anymore...
Fighting doesnt help, it only makes things worse!
Ok, you proved you're better in fighting,
But worse in friendship, fairness, and peace.
What's more important?
The 1st past? Friends?
Or the 2nd path? Enemies?
I choose the 1st.

Thanks MR! I made it miiself.

nice one. do u lik my poem?

so....peace-ish.

Yeah, I love it!

--backs away-- No peaceish. --runs and hides in a peacefully dark corner.--

LOL!

.............. peace is so much better than darkness! this reminds me of something. theres a video where an italian guy is in Malta, and his englis is bad, so its really funny! he was checking out and:

Manager:Peace on you!
Guy:P*ss on you too, you son of a beach! I'm going back to Italia!

Oh that is bad. But very funny!

HEHEHEH! Malte....

Sighz* --rests head on hands.--

I read it again. Funny the second time.

its really funny! but Achmed the dead terrorist is the best!!! i can laugh the whole time!!

Who hates boys, I DO!!!!

No offense Fenris!

I HATE EVERY SINGLE GODDAM BOY AS A U KNOW WHAT!!! but as normal friends they;'re oay..... i guess....

I feel like a poem..:


And there the sun will set,

ending a beautiful day,


yet my heart is empty,

without you filling it,

i am broken,

a broken sack of nothing.



AND:

I miss the nice days, the luv we shared, the hugs, the tears, the sun, the sky,m the stars, the mooon, the kisses..

All of those are broken pieces of good times we shared.

And those scars now on my heart.



AND:

Love,
Pain,
Trust,
Hurt,
Acknowledgement.
Betrayal.

All i have experienced and all i have over comed. My friends, we are strong.

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! got crazy with an e... for sum reason i dunno....

(:.

Thankerz.