Lightstep Clan(Role Play)

Subject: Re: Lightstep Clan(Role Play) Sun Apr 27, 2008 1:10 pm

yo DD! They moved
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Wanderer Age : 28 Joined : 15 Jul 2008 Posts : 3

sees a butterfly and try to catch it.
after a few minutes the butterfly flies away and see that he isn't be here before.
he smells a strong air from other cats and get sneaky crawling to a place where he can hide.
and he has right he saw three cats caming his direction.
so silence as i can i hide myself under the high grass to camouflage myself.
after they tresspassed me i wait a few minutes and comes out of my hiding spot to catch a little bird.
when a saw a nest with young ducks by a pool i sneak to one off the ducks what was sitting there.
after crawling silence i came closer and closer.....
when i was close enough i take a quik sprint and jumps on the duck.
after a little struggle i killed the duck and saw that he has little kids!!!
quik i killed the little kids and started to bring the big duck to my savetyspot
after that i lay the little kids on the front of the road as a present for the leader and go back to my saftyspot and eat the big duck.
after the eating i licked myself clean and goes to sleep

Subject: Re: Lightstep Clan(Role Play) Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:41 pm

um, deathsouls, that is not really the way we roleplay in lost life. In lost life, we use paragraphs and write in third person ^.^ Here, I will show you Very Happy

Your version:

sees a butterfly and try to catch it.
after a few minutes the butterfly flies away and see that he isn't be here before.
he smells a strong air from other cats and get sneaky crawling to a place where he can hide.
and he has right he saw three cats caming his direction.
so silence as i can i hide myself under the high grass to camouflage myself.
after they tresspassed me i wait a few minutes and comes out of my hiding spot to catch a little bird.
when a saw a nest with young ducks by a pool i sneak to one off the ducks what was sitting there.
after crawling silence i came closer and closer.....
when i was close enough i take a quik sprint and jumps on the duck.
after a little struggle i killed the duck and saw that he has little kids!!!
quik i killed the little kids and started to bring the big duck to my savetyspot
after that i lay the little kids on the front of the road as a present for the leader and go back to my saftyspot and eat the big duck.
after the eating i licked myself clean and goes to sleep

Correct version for the website.

Deathsouls padded along the grass, The winter air whipping his face harshly in the field. He then stopped dead as he saw a blue and white butterfly fluttering overhead. Deathsouls grinned mischieviously, getting ready to run. He then darted after the butterfly, leaping and pawing at it playfully.The butterfly then flew higher and higher, until it dissapeared into the light of the sun. Deathsouls then looked around, realizing that He was in new territory. He sniffed the air, scenting other cats. He then hid in a fern close by. He then spotted a chirping blue bird hopping along the grass. He pounced on it, only to miss. He then looked around, seeing ducks in a pond. He charged at the duck, scratching and hissing viscuosly. The duck swatted the cat with it's powerful wings, knocking Deathsouls off balance. Deathsouls fell to the ground, only to rise back up again and kill the duck with one swift bit on the neck. Deathsouls grinned, but then saw little ducklings behind the mother. Deathsouls ripped the ducklings and killed them with ease, then dragged the duck back over to the ferns. DeathSouls grabbed the duckligns shortly after and put them on the road, shwoing the leader that he meant no harm. He then walked back to the ferns, eating his duck with pleasure. The duck tasted moist and soft as Deathsouls gulped the last few bites down. He left the feathers spattered everywhere. He then slowly drifted into a nice, relaxing sleep.

It takes longer, but it makes it a lot more fun ^.^
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Wanderer Joined : 10 May 2008 Posts : 55

Sinder causiously wandered into the clan. He was hoping to become a member. He was good at fighting, so he was going to try to be a warrior... He folded his ears over his head to sho he meant no harm. He looked around for the leader, when a cat approached him.. The other cat was in an offencive position, ready to attack. " I mean no harm.. I just want to try to become a member of this clan. Are you the leader?" He asked in wonder.

Wanderer Joined : 10 May 2008 Posts : 55

Sinder waited for a reply from the other cat, and tried to look for the leader.

Subject: Re: Lightstep Clan(Role Play) Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:25 pm

Subject: Re: Lightstep Clan(Role Play) Sat Aug 02, 2008 3:09 am

BTW Kodiak. No one approved DeathSouls cat, FLuffy.
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Like the Fire, I am feisty. Like the Water, I am dangerous. Like the Earth, I help others to live. Like the Wind, I am silent. Like the Air, I am invisible. Like the Ice, I am Cold, Like the Dark, I am Gothic. Like the Light, I am Loved. Without me, you are nothing...

Where Fire meets Water, where Earth meets Wind, where Air meets Ice, where Light meets Dark. Where you meet me....